Smouldering like the reddish embers in the hearth,
Crackling like the sparks that leap up to catch one another,
Sizzling like the fat that dissolves in the fiery embrace,
Simmering like an unkempt pot,
Diana’s jealousy rages in her breast.
White hot!
©Shailaja V
Now that’s some amazing use of words to describe jealousy :). Served simmering hot :D.
Wonderful depiction! What a visual of rage
Ah, I love the description you used. I was wondering what you could be building up too!
Love the visuals! I got a little jealous about it, too! 🙂
Your use of imagery is fabulous. Good one! 🙂
I like the image of the sparks leaping up to catch one another.
I love how you built up the heat with each line.
The words burn with realism. Loved it 🙂
Yes jealousy burns. And you handled the prompt excellently
My goodness!! That jealousy can turn someone into ashes!
Well written!
jealousy is not gooood.. it burns
The raging heat of jealousy! Well described
my fav phrase is ‘sizzling like the fat that dissolves…’ so creative!
That’s the worst kind of jealousy! Well portrayed 😀
Great imagery Shailaja! The reader has no doubt how fiery hot her jealous temper/mood is! 😉 <3
Oooh, frightening! I’d stay away from her, LOL! 😉
That jealousy thing does burn hot! Nice one! ♥